Rough Cut - First Minute
feel the pace of the editing matches the pace of the musical score. In addition the contrapuntal
musical score works well with the mise-en-scene to emphasise the narrative of the text. The
camera work is steady and proficient through out as well as being well as being well positioned
and framed. On the other hand I feel the diegetic sound could be emphasised more and
additional sounds could be added.
This would further engage the audience and would add emphasis to the
narrative. In comparison to my rough cut at AS I feel my camera work, creativity and
post-production skills have significantly improved. My A2 rough cut is of much higher quality
than my AS.